Tuesday, December 3, 2013

Creative Writing Short Story

Girl: Short Story Original 
By: Zack Menchel                                                                                  
She was petite, beautiful and curvy. The kind of woman that turned heads no matter where she went. She was a dream girl in the realist sense.
She was on the move. She had never cared for this particular variant of weather, but there was no point in hustling through it as the fastest pace she could manage at the moment was a slow crawl. Her thoughts and emotions were clearly affecting the speed and fluidity of her movements.
She sighed as water dripped from her matted hair with the consistency of a luscious waterfall. “I look like a hot mess,” she thought to herself.
            She was exiting the situation, done with it all, tired. It wasn’t anything personal, but he just got boring. She truly missed the excitement of the chase, the sensual nights of passion and the momentous days in the sun, just chilling out, relaxing, carefree.
These memories haunted her throughout each day and over the night, fucking with her sleep cycle and taking a toll on her life.
            The rain had become angry, more intense. Droplets the size of golf balls splashed across her cheeks with the ferocity of a pellet gun.
Her clothing had become heavy, sticking to skin. She hated this feeling almost more than anything else.
Cars cruised by, the sound of their skidding tires splashing in puddles, causing thick brown waves of water to cascade down onto the sidewalk.
            Her piercing green eyes took on a look of trouble, yet they remained put together, longing for adventure and wonder.
After keeping her secret in vain for an extended period of time, she was surprised she had felt so apathetic for so long. She wondered when she had become so cynical of the situation at hand.
            She was always so meticulous, putting everything in its proper place, including her thoughts. She tried not to act differently toward her now boring boyfriend. But somewhere, it had gone wrong. Her cautious ways had only paid off for a limited time, and now she had been had.
            She thought she had always looked just like everyone else, like all of the buildings surrounding her but that wasn’t the case. She had not covered up her tracks and was now as obvious as ever.
            What it was exactly that made everyone alert, on edge, she didn’t know. It wasn’t that she was oblivious but rather the complexity of the situation had begun to curb her awareness.
Her head felt heavy, murky, and filled to the brim with bits and pieces of a puzzle she didn’t understand how to complete.
A shiver shot up her spine from the differing combination of the rain and dropping temperature.
It was getting late. It had been getting late for a few hours now, but she just couldn’t bring herself to go home this time.
Home was no longer where her heart was. But she continued plotting along anyways, at her slow snail-like pace.

Her complexion waned. Tears now joined the waterworks that streamed down her supple, rosy cheeks but it was masked by the rain. None were the wiser.

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